Thanks for another great Saturday session! The highlight for me was Betsy and Michelle sharing their poems with us, and the caring, thoughtful responses from all of you. It was inspirational to have we, educators, come together over a love of writing. Thanks for that gift.
I want to make sure I mention the great contributions many of you are also making to our TeacherPoets community page. Links to original poems, published poets, even whole conversations are popping up even in comments you are leaving each other.
If you haven’t looked around recently, I highly suggest getting lost in there for awhile (shout outs to many of you, including Jennifer’s supportive comments, Catherine and Fran’s recent revisions they both posted, Sheri’s holy-cow-you-took-notes-as-poems(!!), and Kevin’s always-coolness in combining great writing and awesome tools).
Everyone is welcome, no prior poetry writing experience necessary to join in the fun.
Recap of Week 2:
During the second Saturday session we talked about specificity again, this time in descriptions of things. We looked at how evocative poems can actually be quite literal in the way they detail objects. It is the micro-details, the specific ways of calling our attention to bits of these things, that brings them to life. So often the poet’s gift to us is helping us notice details we may too often overlook.
The archive of our first and second live Hangout on Air is here (the videos have already been viewed more than 300 times!):
As I mentioned at the start, we also workshopped two original poem from TeacherPoets. What I love about these conversations is that we not only help to improve one poem, we also learn more about how readers receive our written words. It’s a process of helping others while also helping ourselves grow as writers. Betsy and Michelle were our brave first time sharers, and the community – including those of you on twitter – did a terrific job with specific, caring feedback. It was an awesome experience.
Assignment for Week 3: Ideas are Puzzle Pieces
A Writing Invitation:
- Try on the writing exercise we practiced last Saturday.
- Pick an object, a photo, or something else to observe.
- Then, describe the small details. Aim to not be mysterious, instead say exactly what you see (see the video).
- As you write, try to capture surprising details others might miss. Play with language, but again be clear. Don’t leave your reader confused about what you are describing.
- Write a new poem (or revise an old one) with this strategy.
- If you’d like, post a link to your poem (or leave the full text in a comment) on our TeacherPoets Community page, file it under “Session Three”.
Mentor poems to read:
- Mosquitoes by Aimee Nezukumatathil (second poem on this page), for how she connects a few concrete experiences to tell of a larger experience
- It Took All My Energy by Tony Wallace, for how he leaves some mystery for us as readers but grounds this in a series of very clearly described events
- Also, share links to other poems you love that dive deeply into specific descriptions. Add them to our TeacherPoets Community Page.
Workshopping This Week:
This Saturday we have a three more TeacherPoet’s original poems! Please download each of these, write all over them, and be ready to share your comments live on Saturday. These poems are in draft form and ready for your input:
- Tears by Margaret
- The kitchen window by Markette
- Breathe Goodbye by Crista
Comments can be given live on Saturday via twitter using our hashtag #TeacherPoets.
Kinda like Fight Club: don’t talk about the TeacherPoet poems outside of TeacherPoet workshop. Wait until Saturday to share your feedback!
Session Three Live Stream
Here is the direct link to Session Three’s live streaming session on 4/26 from 11-noon EST. All you need is an internet connection to view:
See you Saturday! Happy writing!